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3 Classmates and Friends 同学和朋友

如何介绍自己的同学和朋友呢?可以从以下方面进行写作。

★ 基本信息:同学或朋友的名字、年龄、居住地;

★ 外貌特征及性格;

★ 爱好;

★ 成为同学或朋友的原因。

通过这些介绍,让大家对你的同学或朋友有一个大致的了解。

用思维导图理清写作思路

关键句型演练

一、基本信息

1)名字

His/ Her name is ... . 他/她的名字是……。

Her name is Lily.

她的名字是莉莉。

... is my good friend. ……是我的好朋友。

Tom is my good friend.

汤姆是我的好朋友。

☆ 根据上面的提示写出自己的句子吧!

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2)年龄

He/ She is ... years old. 他/她……岁了。

She is ten years old.

她十岁了。

☆ 根据上面的提示写出自己的句子吧!

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3)居住地

He/ She lives ... . 他/她住在……。

She lives near my home.

她住在我家附近。

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in a flat 在公寓

in a big house 在大房子里

near the school 学校附近

☆ 根据上面的提示写出自己的句子吧!

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二、外貌特征及性格

1)外貌

He/ She has ... . 他/她有……。

She has long wavy hair.

她留一头长长的卷发。

He/ She is ... . 他/她是……。

She is tall with curly hair.

她高个子,卷发。

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a big mouth 大嘴

a small mouth 小嘴

weak 不够强壮的

fat 肥胖的

☆ 根据上面的提示写出自己的句子吧!

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2)性格

He/ She is ... . 他/她……。

She is helpful.

她很乐于助人。

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helpful 乐于助人的

nice 友好的

lovely 可爱的

naughty 淘气的

☆ 根据上面的提示写出自己的句子吧!

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三、爱好

He/ She likes/loves ... . 他/她喜欢……。

She loves collecting stamps.

她喜欢集邮。

He/ She is good at ... . 他/她擅长……。

He is good at playing chess.

他擅长下棋。

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collecting stamps 集邮

playing chess 下棋

music 音乐

Chinese 语文

☆ 根据上面的提示写出自己的句子吧!

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四、成为同学或朋友的原因

He/ She often helps me with ... . 他/她经常在……上帮助我。

He often helps me with my math.

他经常帮助我学习数学。

He/ She likes to ... with me. 他/她喜欢和我一起……。

She likes to play with me.

她喜欢和我一起玩。

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my study 我的学习

my handwriting 我的书写

play basketball 打篮球

ride a bike 骑自行车

play ping-pang 打乒乓球

☆ 根据上面的提示写出自己的句子吧!

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范文临摹

A Good Friend

I have a good friend. His name is Mike.He is nine years old. His hair is short and black. He likes wearing black clothes because he thinks it is very cool. He has a lot of hobbies, such as playing football and swimming. He likes to play with me. We often play games together after school.

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注释

a lot of 许多 hobby 爱好

such as 比如 play games 玩游戏

after school 放学后

译文

好朋友

我有一个好朋友。他的名字叫迈克。他九岁了。他的头发又短又黑。他喜欢穿黑色的衣服,因为他觉得那样很酷。他有很多爱好,比如踢足球和游泳。他喜欢和我一起玩。放学后我们经常一起玩游戏。

模仿秀

☆ 根据模板仿写作文。

I have a good friend. His name is __________(名字).He is __________(年龄) years old. His hair is __________(外貌). He likes __________(爱好). He has a lot of hobbies, such as __________ and __________. We often __________(一起做什么) together after school.

我来写一写

☆ 动笔前,我们一起回顾下关于介绍同学或朋友的写作要点。

☆ 现在,写出自己的作文吧!

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参考范文

My Classmate Betty

Betty is my classmate. She is ten years old, just like me. We live in the same neighborhood and often go to school together. She is a beautiful and lovely girl with big eyes and long hair. She is very good at English. She often helps me with my study. I can learn a lot from her.

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译文

我的同学贝蒂

贝蒂是我的同学。她十岁了,和我同岁。我们住在同一个小区,经常一起上学。她是一个漂亮又可爱的女孩,有一双大眼睛和一头长发。她英语很好。她经常帮助我学习。我可以从她身上学到很多。